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  • 因为悲伤这一事物可被死亡完全吞没,而黑暗之物的生命,正是死亡之物和将死之物。
Re: 魔法少女世界的神话物品设计以及其它
« 回帖 #10 于: 2020-04-10, 周五 17:31:05 »
有被这个认知震撼到。

离线 孔孔

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看了一眼,想起自己的diy还没有开始动笔(沉思),再看了一眼这个内容,算了继续不动笔(顺便一提外道用佐藤老师插图就是屑
过去软糯的我已经死了,现在的我是更软糯的我!

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  • 年轻的人啊,去读陀思妥耶夫斯基吧,那里有你要的所有答案。
由此可见闲聊区瞎玩梗是不好的……
有没有想写小说的少年啊,可以找我涅。

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PF私用翻译

1人话是一种接近失传的语言,地球上活着的会说人话的人应该没有超过一百个。
2耶稣:你们中无罪的,可以拿石头打她。
众人一听纷纷拿起石头争先恐后将其砸死。

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炫酷的概念,巨大的野心和永远不知身在何处的源代码。
你是不是某个OS的兄弟?
Nato al lume guizzante della candela 生于摇曳的烛光
Scritto in tempi oscuri 写于黑暗的时代
Sulla vecchia pergamena 在古老的羊皮纸上
Scorre la penna 笔尖滑动
E dal suo braccio nasce 从他的臂膀生出
Il disegno delle volte celesti 苍穹的图案
È l'inizio dei tempi 那是时代的起点
E cambierà il mondo 它也将改变世界

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我在小学三年级的时候画过一些模仿超级玛丽的地图,在小学六年级的时候写过一些自己设计的即时战略兵种数据,比楼主这坨垃圾有可玩性多了
之所以小学六年级才写主要是因为那时候才第一次在同学家接触电脑和c&c,在此之前对此没有概念,现代小朋友应该做得更好一些
黄金是失去了轨道的星星,诗人是失去了教会的祭司

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...Now, one thing about rules, is that eventually you'll have to ask yourself: "How will people other than yourself run this (as easy as they can)?"

But, at this point, the question seems to be "How the heck can you yourself run this without a computer?"

Not wasting any time, I'll do this in point form:
-) Removing stats, and make characters have equipment-based stats, isn't a bad idea.
-) But you have WAY TOO MANY ITEMS, AND NO APPEARANT CENTRAL INDEX to your core rules. That means people have to read ALL your items to understand how your rule works, and since people aren't you, right out of the gate you're asking people to literally GUESS your rules... And what's our incentive to do that?
-) Another problem with you, pretty much since the beginning, was your "flow of mind" way of writing: Half (more than half actually) of everything you wrote was your mind-ramblings which didn't really fit with whatever your wanted to do at that point, whether it be backstory or rules. That was why I said you're a semi-HYBRID because that's exactly what the HYBRID guy did: You typed everything out, but didn't try to make them readable. (You're literally like me typing in English in a Chinese forum, except that I do it because I know nobody actually cared what I typed so I don't bother anymore, unless I thinks its important enough... In that sense, I guess you don't actually cared if people read your stuffs then? v=3=v )
-) And, at the end of the day, you just don't know how TRPG operates. The rules-related stuffs above, its the type of things you see in a Diablo- or F2PMMO-clone, with RMT-based stat-stacking. You did more than that last guy a few weeks ago who pretty much just copied the frontend stat of a smartphone-MMO... But more doesn't mean better, especially in this case: That guy had no backstage op, that made his stuff easy to figure out; You might have a backstage, but you are so overly TMI and half of it mixed with your ramblings that it literally discourage people to even try to figure yours out. (From what little I saw of your calculations, at only a glance I admit... It could probably be simpler: You should aim for something you can do by head in 3-5 seconds per sequence, preferably less. And no I don't actually know what your mechanics are, just that it definitely won't be less than 5 seconds however you do it without an actual app to do the math.)

Keep it simple.
Make it viable.
Splatbook spurge only when you have a product you can stand on.

But, again, I know you don't actually cared, so whatever. v=w=v
« 上次编辑: 2020-04-11, 周六 15:34:00 由 Mounrou »
我用不來中文輸入法,所以我只能手寫中文字
在電腦上打中文字相比起英文而言大概要花我10倍的時間,而且會累死我。 >3< (Which has no point when people just skip it anyhow.)
所以,除非這事情非常非常重要,否則我一般只會用英文。
如果你看不懂英文,非常重要時我會盡可能嘗試去打中文。 -w-b
( Except Grammar Nazis cause, you know, THEY'RE RELATED TO NAZIS!!! And pretty impolite to boot too. =_+\ )

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方块那张图好可爱
始终如一的男人。

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说真的,拜读这部masterpiece拓宽我们想象力的极限,不也很好吗

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拓寬傻逼力的極限嗎?不用了謝謝
若想为某个“高尚”的理想号召群众,最有效的方式,莫过于许诺他们一种折磨他人的正当理由。
能在无愧的良知下肆意破坏,能将恶行化作道德的怒火,这是心理上最精致的奢侈品,是道德感所能提供的最甜美诱惑。