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【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 于: 2021-06-11, 周五 12:39:11 »
幽魂 Specter

        当一个邪恶的凡物死去时,它有时会以幽魂的形态出没于它的葬身之地,(这形态是这个恶人)充满恨意的残余,总是在寻求屠戮他人——尤其是类人生物——企图将自己的痛苦尽分摊到可能多的灵魂上。(尽管)一个幽魂(仍)保有它曾经人格的怪异拟象,但却附上了一种堕落的使命感,(令)它(变得)不可理喻。
        一个被剥夺了伤害活着的类人生物机会的幽魂会变得越来越痛苦并失去理性,近似一个永远饥饿且无法靠死亡从痛苦中解脱之人的心情。

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幽魂之奴 Spectral Thralls
幽魂通常会存下一些类人奴仆以供折磨,预防饥焰中烧带来的痛苦。但因为它们无法最小化它们的邪恶之触的伤害,等级太低的类人奴仆通常没法坚持太久。

幽魂 Specter              生物 7

守序邪恶 中型 虚体 不死
察觉 +15;黑暗视觉
语言 通用语,死灵语;心灵感应 100尺(只能与幽魂之奴沟通)
技能 特技 +17,威吓 +15,隐秘 +17
力量 -5, 敏捷 +6, 体质 +4, 智力 +0, 感知 +4, 魅力 +4

AC 25; 强韧 +13,反射 +17,意志 +15
HP 95,负能量治疗;免疫 死亡效果,疾病,麻痹,毒素,精准,失去意识;抗力 全部5(除了力场,幽冥或正能量;对抗非魔法伤害时翻倍)
气势凶猛(灵光,情绪,恐惧,心灵 30尺,DC 22
饥焰中烧Pain Starvation 一位超过一个月没有对活着的类人生物造成任何负能量伤害的幽魂会变得绝望而近乎野蛮。它的阵营从守序邪恶变为混乱邪恶,失去对任何它可能拥有的腐化奴仆的控制,并获得迅捷状态。(迅捷状态获得的)额外动作只能用邪恶之触打击对抗类人目标。只要在任何回合内它对一个活着的类人生物造成了负能量伤害,在此回合结束时它就变回守序邪恶并不再有迅捷状态,但所有它(因饥饿而)失去控制的奴仆仍是自由的。
阳光失能Sunlight Powerlessness 幽魂被阳光照射时获得笨拙(clumsy) 2和缓慢(slowed) 2,只要它还在阳光下,此状态就会持续。


速度 飞行 40尺
近战 [A] 邪恶之触 +16(娴熟),伤害 2d8+8 负能量
幽魂腐化Spectral Corruption [AA](诅咒,神术,惑控系,失能,心灵 幽魂进行一次邪恶之触打击。如果它对一个生物造成伤害,幽魂获得5点临时生命值,且被选做目标的生物必须通过DC 24意志豁免来避免被腐化。

  • 大成功 该生物不受影响并临时免疫此能力1分钟。
  • 成功 该生物获得呆滞(stupefied) 2,持续1小时。
  • 失败 该生物屈服于腐化,暂时成为一个幽魂之奴。该生物被幽魂控制,服从幽魂的心灵感应或口头命令,但幽魂之奴不会服从明显会导致自毁的命令。这类奴役持续到奴仆的下一个回合结束,此时他将不再被控制,并获得持续1小时的呆滞(stupefied) 2。
  • 大失败 如同失败,但持续时间无限。奴仆可在每个他的回合结束时进行一个新的意志豁免;若成功则不再被控制,并获得持续1小时的呆滞(stupefied) 2。
劇透 -  原文:
Specter
When an evil mortal creature dies, it sometimes returns to haunt the area of its death as a specter, a hateful remnant, always seeking to slay others—particularly humanoids—in an attempt to distribute its pain among as many souls as it can. A specter maintains a strange semblance of its prior identity, but with a corrupted sense of purpose. It cannot be reasoned with.

A specter denied the opportunity to harm living humanoids grows increasingly agonized and irrational, akin to the mindset of a starving person forever denied a release from agony through death.

Recall Knowledge - Undead (Religion): DC 23
SpecterCreature 7
LEMediumIncorporealUndead
Source Bestiary 2 pg. 248 2.0
Perception +15; darkvision
Languages Common, Necril; telepathy 100 feet (with spectral thralls only)
Skills Acrobatics +17, Intimidation +15, Stealth +17
Str -5, Dex +6, Con +4, Int +0, Wis +4, Cha +4
AC 25; Fort +13, Ref +17, Will +15
HP 95 (negative healing); Immunities death effects, disease, paralyzed, poison, precision, unconscious; Resistances all 5 (except force, ghost touch, or positive; double resistance vs. non-magical)
Frightful Presence (aura, emotion, fear, mental) 30 feet, DC 22
Pain Starvation A specter that goes for more than a month without dealing negative damage to a living humanoid becomes desperate and almost feral. It changes alignment from lawful evil to chaotic evil, loses control of any corrupted thralls it might have, and becomes quickened. It can use its additional action only to make vile touch Strikes against humanoid targets. At the end of any turn in which it deals any amount of negative damage to a living humanoid, it reverts to lawful evil and is no longer quickened, but any thralls it lost control of remain free.
Sunlight Powerlessness A specter caught in sunlight is clumsy 2 and slowed 2 for as long as it remains in the sunlight.
Speed fly 40 feet
Melee Single Action vile touch +16 (finesse), Damage 2d8+8 negative.
Spectral Corruption [two-actions] (curse, divine, enchantment, incapacitation, mental) The specter makes a vile touch Strike. If it damages a living creature, the specter gains 5 temporary Hit Points and the target creature must attempt a DC 24 Will save to avoid becoming corrupted.

Critical Success The creature is unaffected and is temporarily immune to spectral corruption for 1 minute.

Success The creature is stupefied 2 for 1 hour.

Failure The creature succumbs to the corruption and becomes a spectral thrall temporarily. The creature is controlled by the specter, obeying the specter's telepathic or spoken orders, though a spectral thrall does not obey obviously self-destructive orders. This lasts until the end of the thrall’s next turn, at which point it is no longer controlled but becomes stupefied 2 for 1 hour.

Critical Failure As failure, but the duration is unlimited. The thrall can attempt a new Will save at the end of each of its turns; on a success, it is no longer controlled by the specter but becomes stupefied 2 for 1 hour.

erra补充:被召唤的幽魂无法使用幽魂腐化能力来控制生物
« 上次编辑: 2022-12-16, 周五 00:13:02 由 璀璨星炬 »
理想的译法是这样的:先把原文看懂,照原文译出来,看看念不念得下去,试删掉几个不一定用得着的字,看看是否有损文义和文气。如果有损,再补回来。试把不可少的字加进去,看看是否超出原文范围,增减以后和原文再校对一次。有些地方是否译错,语气的轻重是否恰如其分,原文的弦外之音译文是找不找得到?原文的意思要消化;译文的文字要推敲。有经验的译者可能一下笔就译好了,不过还是要推敲的时候多。

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Re: 【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 回帖 #1 于: 2021-06-11, 周五 12:40:52 »
幽魂的初版能力太强,以至于在erra里惨遭削弱,以下是削弱前的数据:

近战 [A] 邪恶之触 +18(娴熟),伤害 6d6 负能量 加 幽魂腐化Spectral Corruption

幽魂腐化Spectral Corruption(诅咒,神术,惑控系,失能,心灵 当幽魂用邪恶之触对一个活物造成伤害时,幽魂获得5点临时生命值,且被选做目标的生物必须通过DC 25意志豁免来避免被腐化。
    大成功 该生物不受影响并临时免疫此能力1分钟。
    成功 该生物获得呆滞(stupefied) 2,持续1小时。
    失败 该生物屈服于腐化,成为一个幽魂之奴。该生物被幽魂控制,服从幽魂的心灵感应或口头命令,但幽魂之奴不会服从明显会导致自毁的命令。奴仆可在每个他的回合结束时进行一个新的意志豁免;若成功则不再被控制,并获得持续1小时的呆滞(stupefied) 2。
    大失败 如同失败,但在诅咒被移除或幽魂屈服于饥焰中烧前,这个生物永远是幽魂的奴仆;他无法尝试意志豁免来自行恢复。

劇透 -  原文:
Melee [one-action] vile touch +18 (finesse), Damage 6d6 negative plus spectral corruption
Spectral Corruption (curse, divine, enchantment, incapacitation, mental) When the specter damages a living creature with its vile touch Strike, the specter gains 5 temporary Hit Points and the target creature must attempt a DC 25 Will save to avoid becoming corrupted.
Critical Success The creature is unaffected and is temporarily immune to spectral corruption for 1 minute.
Success The creature is stupefied 2 for 1 hour.
Failure The creature succumbs to the corruption and becomes a spectral thrall. The creature is controlled by the specter, obeying the specter’s telepathic or spoken orders, though a spectral thrall does not obey obviously self-destructive orders. It can attempt a new Will save at the end of each of its turns; on a success, it is no longer controlled by the specter but becomes stupefied 2 for 1 hour.
Critical Failure As failure, but the creature remains a thrall to the specter until the curse is removed or until the specter succumbs to pain starvation; it can’t attempt new Will saves to recover on its own.
« 上次编辑: 2021-06-11, 周五 13:18:06 由 璀璨星炬 »
理想的译法是这样的:先把原文看懂,照原文译出来,看看念不念得下去,试删掉几个不一定用得着的字,看看是否有损文义和文气。如果有损,再补回来。试把不可少的字加进去,看看是否超出原文范围,增减以后和原文再校对一次。有些地方是否译错,语气的轻重是否恰如其分,原文的弦外之音译文是找不找得到?原文的意思要消化;译文的文字要推敲。有经验的译者可能一下笔就译好了,不过还是要推敲的时候多。

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Re: 【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 回帖 #2 于: 2021-06-11, 周五 14:20:15 »
其实很多非DND的作品幽灵和幽魂的译名都是这样的,不知道为什么到了DND这里就要反过来。
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Re: 【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 回帖 #3 于: 2021-06-11, 周五 14:21:04 »
其实很多非DND的作品幽灵和幽魂的译名都是这样的,不知道为什么到了DND这里就要反过来。
谁知道呢,萧规曹随,就这么传下来了
理想的译法是这样的:先把原文看懂,照原文译出来,看看念不念得下去,试删掉几个不一定用得着的字,看看是否有损文义和文气。如果有损,再补回来。试把不可少的字加进去,看看是否超出原文范围,增减以后和原文再校对一次。有些地方是否译错,语气的轻重是否恰如其分,原文的弦外之音译文是找不找得到?原文的意思要消化;译文的文字要推敲。有经验的译者可能一下笔就译好了,不过还是要推敲的时候多。

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Re: 【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 回帖 #4 于: 2022-07-02, 周六 13:29:36 »
这货能飞

-> 速度 飞行40尺

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Re: 【Bestiary 2】幽魂 Specter
« 回帖 #5 于: 2022-07-05, 周二 02:04:59 »
这货能飞

-> 速度 飞行40尺

已改

这玩意纯吃等级压制,要是PC等级上去了就是个白板…
理想的译法是这样的:先把原文看懂,照原文译出来,看看念不念得下去,试删掉几个不一定用得着的字,看看是否有损文义和文气。如果有损,再补回来。试把不可少的字加进去,看看是否超出原文范围,增减以后和原文再校对一次。有些地方是否译错,语气的轻重是否恰如其分,原文的弦外之音译文是找不找得到?原文的意思要消化;译文的文字要推敲。有经验的译者可能一下笔就译好了,不过还是要推敲的时候多。