哥兹莱面具(出自内海世界298页)
灵光:变化系 CL:8
占据:头部 价格:8000GP 重量:1磅
描述:
很久以前,一个狂热的崇拜哥莱兹的宗教集团,宣称风暴即将毁灭他们,他们相信眼睛是风暴之主的标志。他们的高级成员创造了一种魔法面具,希望能够帮助引领他们成功度过这场来自于风暴的浩劫。然而,他们对于肆虐在该地区的种种暴行却仍旧毫无防备,导致这个宗教和他们的家园很快被消灭了。时至今日,那些独特的面具许多都留存了下来,被一些酋长与巫医携带。这些面具大多被丑化,与原来的外观扭曲成一个怪物或恶魔的面貌。它们的新主人把它们称作哥莱兹面具。
一个哥莱兹面具能让你无视雾、烟,以及所有水蒸气和沉淀物(包括水下)所造成的视线遮挡,如同它们不存在一样。此外,在受风或风暴影响时,你视作比原本体型大一体型,并且在这类豁免中,获得+4无名加值。最后,一个面具能让佩戴者获得每天1小时的水下呼吸,这些时间不需要是连续的,但每次使用最少需持续10分钟。
制造要求:制造奇物,操纵风向,水中呼吸。材料花费4000GP。
剧透 - :
PFS Legal Goz Mask
Source Inner Sea World Guide pg. 298 (Amazon)
Aura moderate transmutation; CL 8th
Slot head; Price 8,000 gp; Weight 1 lb.
Description
Shortly after the Eye of Abendego began, a fanatical splinter-cult of Gozreh known as the Storm Kindlers flocked to the region, convinced the Eye was a manifestation of the Storm Lord himself. The upper tier of this group created enchanted masks to aid in the navigation of the often storm-lashed swamps. The Storm Kindlers, however, were unprepared for the savagery and evil that had claimed the Sodden Lands, and they and their home were quickly wiped out. Today, many of these distinctive masks remain, now worn by humanoid chieftains and Koboto witch doctors. The masks are often defaced, with the original appearance twisted into a monstrous or demonic visage. Their new owners refer to them as goz masks.
A goz mask allows you to see through fog, smoke, and other obscuring vapors as if they did not exist (this ability functions underwater as well, allowing the wearer to see through thick silt and other aquatic precipitates). Additionally, you are treated as one size category larger than you are and gain a +4 bonus on all saving throws made to resist the effects of wind while wearing a goz mask. A goz mask allows its wearer to breathe water for 1 hour per day—these minutes need not be consecutive, but must be expended in minimum increments of 10 minutes each.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, control winds, water breathing; Cost 4,000 gp
为什么每一楼都有那么明显的错误和随手乱翻呢?我要开始一层楼一层楼地制裁你们了!
梦子我没有想到你也是这么信口胡来的人。
接下来每句上文引用的内容,即
错误翻译将以红字标出,接下来
黑字的是英文原文,最后
蓝色的是正确翻译如果梦子原先的翻译大差不差,就不会标红了,但是仍然会给出更好的或者更适合我前后文的译文。
我将在翻译中使用的专有名词译名:
Gozreh 哥兹莱
Goz 哥兹
Eye of Abendego 阿本迪戈暴风眼
Storm Kindlers 风暴激发者
Sodden Land 浸漫之地
哥兹莱面具Goz Mask
哥兹面具译注:如果读了这间物品的描述,就应该能知道为什么叫哥兹面具而不是哥兹莱面具
很久以前,Shortly after the Eye of Abendego began,
在阿本迪戈暴风眼开始形成后不久,译注:驴唇不对马嘴。设定中,阿本迪戈暴风眼,是Sodden Land西部海上的一个永不停息的巨型飓风,并没有形成很长时间。
一个狂热的崇拜哥莱兹的宗教集团,宣称风暴即将毁灭他们,a fanatical splinter-cult of Gozreh known as the Storm Kindlers flocked to the region,
一个被称作“风暴激发者”的从哥兹莱教会中分裂出来的狂热教派在这个地区聚集了起来,译注:“这个地区”指的就是浸漫之地周边地区
他们相信眼睛是风暴之主的标志。convinced the Eye was a manifestation of the Storm Lord himself.
他们相信暴风眼就是风暴之主本人在凡间的显能。他们的高级成员创造了一种魔法面具,希望能够帮助引领他们成功度过这场来自于风暴的浩劫。The upper tier of this group created enchanted masks to aid in the navigation of the often storm-lashed swamps.
这个教团的高阶成员创造了一种魔法面具,来帮助他们在时常风暴肆虐的沼泽中穿行。译注:浸漫之地的主要地貌之一是沼泽
然而,他们对于肆虐在该地区的种种暴行却仍旧毫无防备,The Storm Kindlers, however, were unprepared for the savagery and evil that had claimed the Sodden Lands,
然而,风暴激发者们却并没有准备好如何对付那些占据着浸漫之地的蛮族和邪怪,导致这个宗教和他们的家园很快被消灭了。
and they and their home were quickly wiped out.
于是这个教派连同他们的老巢很快就被消灭了。时至今日,那些独特的面具许多都留存了下来,Today, many of these distinctive masks remain,
如今,仍有许多这种特征明显的面具留存于世,被一些酋长与巫医携带。now worn by humanoid chieftains and Koboto witch doctors.
只是穿戴它们的人变成了人形生物的酋长和考伯托巫医。译注:考伯托是当地食人族的统治阶级的名称
这些面具大多被丑化,与原来的外观扭曲成一个怪物或恶魔的面貌。The masks are often defaced, with the original appearance twisted into a monstrous or demonic visage.
这些面具原来的外观多数已被破坏,扭曲成了一副怪物或恶魔般的面孔。它们的新主人把它们称作哥莱兹面具。
Their new owners refer to them as goz masks.
面具的新主人将它们称作哥兹面具。描述部分说完了。大多数内容都是堪称自己根据原文重新编的描述,中间夹杂着各种对语素的省略和语义的误解。接下来是规则部分。规则部门的错误更不应该犯,而很不幸的,还是犯了很多。这里的红字将只标注出梦子译文中错误的地方,突出错误重点。一个哥莱兹面具能让你
无视雾、烟,
以及所有水蒸气和沉淀物(包括水下)所造成的视线遮挡,如同它们不存在一样。
A goz mask allows you to see through fog, smoke, and other obscuring vapors as if they did not exist (this ability functions underwater as well, allowing the wearer to see through thick silt and other aquatic precipitates).
哥兹面具能让你看穿雾、烟和其他阻碍视线的蒸汽,如同它们并不存在(该能力在水下也能运作,让穿戴者可以看穿浑浊的泥沙和其他水中的沉淀物)。此外,
在受风或风暴影响时,你视作比原本体型大一体型,并且在这类豁免中,获得+4
无名加值。
Additionally, you are treated as one size category larger than you are and gain a +4 bonus on all saving throws made to resist the effects of wind while wearing a goz mask.
此外,若穿戴哥兹面具,你在抵抗风的效果时,体型被视为比原本体型大一级,且在所有此类豁免中获得+4加值。
最后,一个面具能让佩戴者获得每天1小时的水下呼吸,这些时间不需要是连续的,但每次使用
最少需持续10分钟。
A goz mask allows its wearer to breathe water for 1 hour per day—these minutes need not be consecutive, but must be expended in minimum increments of 10 minutes each.
最后,哥兹面具让穿戴者能够每天在水下呼吸1小时。这些时间不必是连续的,但是必须以10分钟为单位来花费。完。
致下一个乱翻的人(其实从回帖顺序来说是“上一个”):伊安安在注视着你!